English 4700  Advanced Composition
Dr. Richard Nordquist
Summer 2008 (Study Abroad in England)
Armstrong Atlantic State University
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Assignment #5

ISSUES

Final Revision Due: All assignments for the summer 2008 independent-study version of this class must be submitted no later than July 28, 2008.
Drafts for Review: Drafts may be submitted at any time (up to and including July 22, 2008) as Word docs attached to e-mail sent to nordqudi@mail.armstrong.edu.  When sending drafts, be sure to provide your name, the name of the course, and the name of the particular assignment you are working on.  To help me provide you with useful feedback, I encourage you to send along specific questions and concerns when you submit drafts.
Length: 1,200-1,500 words (approximately five to seven double-spaced word-processed pages)

In this assignment, we will inform our readers about a particular issue and provide commentary on that issue.  However, we may choose from a variety of ways to approach our subject (and our readers): as a conventional argument, as a simple exposition of opposing views, as a proposal, or as satire. (Each of these approaches is discussed briefly below.) In any case, we may combine personal experience with close observation and factual investigation–as long as our primary focus is on the issue and not on ourselves. What we do not what to write for this assignment is any sort of tiresome rant, ill-informed "opinion piece," or empty exercise in sarcasm: in other words, if we find ourselves sounding even remotely like a talking head on MSNBC, a "Vox Populi" squib in the Morning News, or anybody who might appear on The Jerry Springer Show (especially Jerry himself), we're trucking down the wrong road. Attend to the guidelines, suggestions, and requirements that follow.


Due Dates
Send me an e-mail message if you would like to discuss topic ideas or if you get an early start on your draft and would like a quick, early response. 

Drafts (following the guidelines and format outlined below) are due as early in the term as possible but certainly no later than July 23.  

Because guided revision is an essential part of this course, submitting a draft on time is critical. 

Final version of the essay (following the guidelines and format below) is due as early in the term as possible but no later than the end of the summer term--July 28.
 


Required Readings in Zinsser's On Writing Well:
Read carefully Chapters 22 (The Tyranny of the Final Product), 23 (A Writer's Decisions), and 24 (Write As Well As You Can). 

Required Online Readings (Models of Exposition)

--"Stop Ethnocentrism: A Case for Armchair Multiculturalism," by Laura Higgins Flaurand (Transitions Abroad).
--"Know Your Enemy: Confronting the Case Against Study Abroad," by Bill Hoffa (Transitions Abroad)
--"Advocating for Study Abroad," by Carl A. Herrin (Transitions Abroad)
--"What's the Big Idea?" by Dorothy Wickenden (The New Yorker, June 30, 2008)
--"Why Americans Aren't Dumb," by A.J. Jacobs (Esquire, July 2008)
--"Drugs: Case for Legalizing Marijuana," by Gore Vidal (New York Times, 1970)
--"In Defense of Talk Shows," by Barbara Ehrenreich (Time magazine, 1995)

Suggestions for Finding an Effective Issues Topic
First, read the assigned chapters and the online articles: the issues considered in these readings may stimulate some ideas of your own.   (As always, I'll be happy to provide you with additional examples.)  Next, drawing from your own academic and personal experiences, consider topics that you have already studied in depth–especially topics that you think are commonly misjudged or misunderstood.  Issues may be lurking here.  Similarly, think about some local controversies that may have attracted your interest (anything from the location of a new landfill, for instance, to the gating of River Street): if you have ideas on where to find reliable information, you may have a good issue to work with.

Topic ideas may also come to you as you consider the different approaches available to you in this assignment.

Conventional Argument.   The conventional argument can generally be thought of as a "pro" or "con" affair: physical education courses should (or should not) be required of nontraditional students; AASU should (or should not) sponsor a child-care center on campus; college athletes (or should not) be paid a salary and exempted from academic requirements; affirmative action programs do (or do not) perpetuate cultural myths of racial inferiority; Thanksgiving does (or does not) represent a continuing denial of the crimes committed against Native Americans; laws against drinking alcohol until the age of 21 do (or do not) encourage teenagers to abuse alcohol; sanctions against hate speech should (or should not) be implemented on campus; free condoms should (or should not) be distributed to high school students.  If you take a "pro" or "con" approach, make sure that you build your arguments on facts--not on feelings or opinions.

A Simple Exposition of Opposing Views. You might think of this approach as a conventional argument without the attitude: in other words, rather than actively trying to persuade your readers one way or another about a controversial issue, you set out to inform your readers about the complexities of an issue so that they have a basis for making up their own minds. (Despite appearing to be objective, a "simple exposition" of this kind may in fact be more persuasive than the conventional argument–particularly when you're attempting to get your readers to think about a generally unpopular or unlikely-sounding approach to an issue.)  Are there any issues that you have changed your mind about after much research and thought?  Or are you now genuinely uncertain about some issues that you used to hold firm opinions about?   Of course, any of the topics listed in the previous paragraph could also be adapted to this approach.

A Proposal.  You might want to propose a new holiday of your own devising–or a new required course for the core curriculum or a law requiring that all adolescents be exiled to Montana until their eighteenth birthday.  The basic parts of a proposal are a detailed explanation of the project or plan that you are proposing and a thorough justification for the implementation of the proposal.  Many proposals, in the spirit of Jonathan Swift's "A Modest Proposal," take the form of satire.

Satire. Zinsser's chapter on "Humor" should give you some ideas about developing a satirical approach to a subject.  Traditionally, satire has been defined as the use of irony and exaggeration to ridicule instances of human folly or evil.    More broadly, satire might be understood as using humor to make a serious point.  Writing an effective satire isn't easy--particularly in our age of cheap sarcasm and the easy insult (i.e., one idiot making wisecracks about another idiot)--but the strategy is potentially powerful. Think about some of the ironies you may have perceived in our day-to-day lives: the elevation of self-esteem over intelligence in our educational system, perhaps, or the presumption that technology is saving us time (for what?) or that new communications systems are actually improving human communications (even when we have nothing at all to communicate).  Think about the proliferation of consumer warnings for stupid people or the fantastical worlds projected by infomercials. But above all keep in mind that the ability to find humor in our own behavior--in other words, to laugh at ourselves--may be the most effective approach of all.

Composing Strategies
Because of the diverse nature of the topics possible for this assignment, we may be employing some distinctively different argumentative strategies.  But one guideline stands above all others: be prepared to narrow and focus your topic.  For instance, 1,500 words is not nearly enough for you (or anyone) to mount a cogent, carefully researched argument in favor or against the unification of Ireland.   Nor do we have space, for example, to examine the pros and cons of all the issues pertaining to all the different varieties of study-abroad programs.   But we might consider the advantages and disadvantages, the strengths and the weaknesses of short study-abroad programs--using our own experiences in the Ireland Program to illustrate our points specifically. 

As usual, if you give yourself a good head start on the assignment, we can (through e-mail) discuss some of the various ways to develop your issues article--methods that are well-informed and engaging as well as persuasive.  Again, be prepared to do some practical research (this article should be fact-based--not opinion-based)--and (as always) leave plenty of time to revise.  For general guidelines, review the strategies recommended for earlier assignments, and follow the now-standard format.  In addition, check out the guidelines at the following web sites:

Format
When you send me drafts (remember to include at the top of the draft your name, the name of the course, the title of the particular assignment, and the date of submission), be sure to let me know which parts of your article you think are working out just fine--and which parts are giving you problems.  

The final version of the article should be word processed, following the standard format (see previous assignments).  Following your essay, provide a brief self-evaluation by responding to these questions:

        1.  What part of this profile do you like most, and why?
        2.  What part gave you the most difficulty?  Explain.
        3.  What is your overall evaluation of the profile--its  particular strengths and possible weaknesses?

Please be as specific as you can in your answers.

Your Name

e-mail address

Date

 

 

 

 

 

 

Title of Essay

 

Begin essay here...

Name of Assignment

Status (e.g., Revision #2)

approx. length:  (in words)

 


English 4700 is taught by Dr. Richard Nordquist.
Armstrong Atlantic State University
Solms Hall 211C
11935 Abercorn Street
Savannah, Georgia 31419
912/344 2613

e-mail:  nordqudi@mail.armstrong.edu
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