English 4700  Advanced Composition
Dr. Richard Nordquist
Summer 2008 (Study Abroad in England)
Armstrong Atlantic State University
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Assignment #2

Travel Essay

Final Revision Due: All assignments for the summer 2008 independent-study version of this class must be submitted no later than July 28, 2008.
Drafts for Review: Drafts may be submitted at any time (up to and including July 22, 2008) as Word docs attached to e-mail sent to nordqudi@mail.armstrong.edu.  When sending drafts, be sure to provide your name, the name of the course, and the name of the particular assignment you are working on.  To help me provide you with useful feedback, I encourage you to send along specific questions and concerns when you submit drafts.
Length: 1,000-1,200 words (approximately four or five double-spaced word-processed pages)

In this assignment, we will write an account of a visit to some particular place--most likely some particular place in England. Though the place may be either distant or close to home, the purpose of the visit and the focus of the essay should not be primarily personal (no trips to the old homestead or fondly remembered family outings). Rather, through close observation and factual investigation, you should attempt to convey the social, historical, cultural, and/or natural significance of the place itself. Attend to the guidelines, suggestions, and requirements that follow.


Due Dates
Send me an e-mail message if you would like to discuss topic ideas or if you get an early start on your draft and would like a quick, early response. 

Drafts (following the guidelines and format outlined below) are due as early in the term as possible but certainly no later than July 22.  

Because guided revision is an essential part of this course, submitting a draft on time is, simply put, a requirement.  (Amplification:  I put more effort into critiquing drafts--when you still have opportunities to improve your work--than I do evaluating final products.)   

Final version of the essay (following the guidelines and format below) is due as early in the term as possible but no later than the end of the summer term--July 28.
 
See syllabus on grading policies and penalties for late assignments.


Required Readings in Zinsser's On Writing Well:
Review all of Part I ("Principles") and Part II ("Methods"), plus
Read carefully Chapter 13 ("Writing About Places: The Travel Article")

Required Online Readings

-Duncan Fallowell Interviewed (Prospect, July 2000)
-Sample, Savor and Sip: A Trip through London's Borough Market by Clayton Moore (GoWorld Travel)
-W
inchester: A Walk Back in Time, by Gilly Pickup (GoWorld Travel)
-England’s Oxford Tales:
Walking in the footsteps of giants, by Colin Miller
(GoWorld Travel)
[See other British travel essays at GoWorld Travel--and consider submitting your piece here.]
-Follow the Path to England's Middle Earth, by (Times Online)
-On Seeing England for the First Time, (pdf) by Jamaica Kincaid (1991)
-Pick Up That Bag, You Big Lug, by Steve Hendrix (Washington Post, 2004)

Recommended Readings in The Oxford Book of London (for this & other assignments)
- "The Vast Capital," de Quincey (119-121)
- "London Bridge at Midnight" Dickens (132-133)
-"Alone and Unhappy in London," Trollope (143-145)
-"Starvelings and Urchins," by Chesney (161-163)
-"Dostoevsky in the Haymarket" (174-178)
-"Scented Violets," by Van Gogh (185-187)
-"A London Street," by Morrison (212-215)
-"Sherlock Holms at Work and Play," by Doyle (226-229)
-"Lambeth Is Home," by Reeves (268-270)
-"Too Late," byZamyatin (274-276)
-"London--the Moment of June," by V Woolf (283-285)
-"Mr Golspie Looks at London," byPriestly (310-312)
-"Hampstead Heath--1937," by Rasmussen (315-317)
-"Tramps and Others," by Daley (319-321)
-"A West Indian Girl in London," by Rhys (343-345)
-"A Short Trip on the Tube" by Coe (361-365)


Composing Strategies

Be guided by the suggestions contained in Chapter 13 of On Writing Well, "Writing about Places: The Travel Article." Let me highlight a few of Zinsser's precepts and observations:

  • The mere agglomeration of detail is no free pass to the reader=s interest. The detail must be significant.

  • If a phrase comes to you easily, look at it with deep suspicion; it=s probably one of the countless clichés that have woven their way so tightly into the fabric of travel writing.

  • Eliminate every . . . fact that is a known attribute: don=t tell us that the sea had waves and the sand was white. Find details . . . [that] do useful work.

  • Your main task as a travel writer is to find the central idea of the place you=re dealing with.

  • [W]hatever place you write about, go there often enough to isolate the qualities that make it distinctive. Usually this will be some combination of the place and the people who inhabit it.

  • By interviewing local men and women . . . I tapped into one of the richest veins waiting for any writer who goes looking for America: the routine eloquence of people who work at a place that fills a need for someone else.

Some additional things to keep in mind:

1. Prepare for this assignment by reading some good professional writings on places and travel. Begin with the numerous brief examples in Chapter 13 of On Writing Well, and then study the various articles, essays, and excerpts posted above (If you'd like additional examples of travel writing, just let me know.)  Read (and reread) actively: identify passages that strike your interest, and then consider the strategies that were employed to achieve particular effects. 

2. Don't feel at all obliged to visit a traditional tourist spot. The place you choose may be remarkably ordinary (or seemingly so). It may even be downright awful. Just make sure that the place is real and accessible--no trips to heaven or back to the womb. Rely on your journal entries for sharp, fresh impressions.

3. This assignment calls for some basic research: take notes on what you see and hear; obtain facts wherever you can find them.  The essay should be built primarily on factual observations and informative details. If you turn to outside sources for information, make note of those sources. When we review drafts, we=ll discuss the best way to integrate citations into our final texts. But do keep track of your sources.

4. As you make your imaginative return visit to the place (and even, perhaps, as you compose your draft), don't be too quick to impose some grand meaning on your subject.  Let your detailed observations and investigations lead you (and the reader) to a conclusion: induction rather than deduction.

5. Feel free to use the first-person pronoun in your essay, but don't focus excessively on yourself or your feelings.  Don't take this personally, but the reader cares about the place--not about you.

Manuscript format:

Word processed (Microsoft Word or WordPerfect), standard 12-point font, with one-inch margins: top, bottom, left, and right.  Following your essay, provide a brief self-evaluation by responding to these questions:

1. What part of this essay do you like most, and why?
2. What part gave you the most difficulty? Explain.
3. What is your overall evaluation of the essay--its particular strengths and possible weaknesses?
Please be as specific as you can in your answers.

 

Your Name

e-mail address

Date

 

 

 

 

 

 

Title of Essay

 

Begin essay here...

Name of Assignment

Status (e.g., Revision #2)

approx. length:  (in words)

 


 

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English 4700 is taught by Dr. Richard Nordquist.
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