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RHETORICAL TERMS WITH EXAMPLES: 2005

beginning H-Z (Go here for terms beginning A-G.)


rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)  indicates a particularly apt example.  A strike-through (---) indicates an inappropriate, incorrect, or (most often) potentially confusing use of a term (don't take it personally).  The rest are okay: somewhere between "particularly apt" and "potentially confusing."  My comments appear in italics.

With examples provided by students enrolled in ENGL 5730 in Spring 2005 and submitted--in phase one--by the evening of Feb. 9 and--in phase two--by Feb. 16th.

TERMS EXERCISE
(part two of exercise begun last week).  At our CLASS PRODUCTIONS page, go to "77 Rhetorical Terms with Examples" (contributed by the rhetoric class of 2003) and "66 Rhetorical Terms with Examples" (contributed by the rhetoric class of 2002), and "Examples of Rhetorical Terms" (contributed by the rhetoric class of 2000): read the examples and try to define the rhetorical terms they illustrate (then check your answers by clicking on the terms).    Next, and no later than 5:00 this afternoon (Feb. 16, 2005), send me an e-mail with five different examples you have found (or created) of any five different terms (from our list of terms) beginning H through Z (we covered the first part of the alphabet last week).  Be sure to cite the author and title of any poem, song lyric, essay, story, gum wrapper, movie script, t-shirt, road sign, or novel you quote from.  Obviously, I expect you to provide a fresh example, not one that's already been submitted.  And your great challenge is to find examples of some of the less obvious (and perhaps more difficult to remember) terms.  Once again, if you submit sorry examples of terms (such as parable and hyperbole) that we have known most of our lives, I will deduct points and ridicule you in the Rhetoric Hall of Shame.  On the other hand, if you submit particularly imaginative examples for more challenging terms, I will heap extra points upon you and honor your name.  As you're working on the exercise (don't wait till the last minute), send me an e-mail if you're uncertain
about the meaning of a term or the appropriateness of your example.   I'm counting on you to outshine the young rhetoricians who have preceded you in this class.

How to use this page: After studying the example(s) accompanying each rhetorical term below, try to compose a clear and accurate definition of the term.  Better yet, write down your definition.  Then click on the term to compare your definition with the one in our online glossary.

WARNING: Although most of the terms below are illustrated appropriately, some are mistakenly identified, some others are unclearly identified (especially in longer passages, where it may not be obvious which part of the passage illustrates the term), and still others are incompletely identified.    Soon we'll be making some clarifications and corrections to the terms and examples on this page.  Don't feel hurt if your contributions are corrected or qualified in any way: the main purpose of this exercise is to help deepen and clarify your understanding of the terms.


*  For the most part, your contributions have been copied and pasted into the web page without any alterations.  If you spot any errors in the quotations that you sent me, please notify me via e-mail.  In many cases, original formatting has been lost, and so the layout has gotten a little messy (a major problem with texts that were not submitted as Word attachments).  Sorry!  If texts arrived without names, contributors are identified by e-mail addresses.   



Contributors for Terms H-Z

Rob Thomas
Kirsten Mullis
Julia Vanlerberghe
Arthur Tanny
Tanja Supon
Kelley Sanders
Katie Sanders
Oakley Julian
Dee Dee Coursey

Alicia Ferrell
Heather Glover
Chris Shirley
Patrice Beavers
Chris McCormick

Ariana Siennick
Pamela Melton
Christi Healan

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TERMS H-Z

Rob Thomas 

88) Hyperbaton---Shmi Skywalker: "You can't stop change any more than you can stop the suns from setting."  [Star Wars The Phantom Menance] 

89) Isocolon---King Arthur: "There are laws that enslave men, and laws that set them free." [from First Knight] 

90) Oxymoron---Gandalf: I suppose you think that was terribly clever.[Lord of the Rings The Fellowship of the Ring] 

91) Parallelism or Parison---Arthur: "Lancelot, just a thought. A man who fears nothing is a man who loves nothing; and if you love nothing, what joy is there in your life? I may be wrong." [First Knight] 

91) Paranomasia---Duncan: "There is a war on. How is it you are heading west?"

Hawkeye: "Well, we kinda face to the north and, real sudden-like, turn left." [Last of the Mohicans] 

92) Tricolon---Malagant: "What I offer you is freedom; freedom from Arthur's tyrannical dream; freedom from Arthur's tyrannical law; freedom from Arthur's tyrannical God." [First Knight] 

93) Tricolon---Qui-Gon Jinn: Credits will do fine.

Watto: No, they won't-a. What? You think you're some kind of Jedi, waving your hand around like that? I'm a Toydarian, mind tricks don't work on me. Only money. No money, no parts, no deal! (or) Qui-Gon Jinn: Do you hear that?

[a rumbling is heard in the distance]

Jar Jar Binks: Yeah.

Qui-Gon Jinn: That is the sound of a thousand terrible things headed this way.

Obi-Wan: If they find us, they will crush us, grind us into TINY pieces and BLAST us into oblivion! [from Star Wars The Phantom Menance]

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Kirsten Mullis    

94) Meiosis

Pig (for police officer) 

95) Mondegreen

“You’re the cheese to my pizza mine” (for “you’re the key to my peace of mind” from “Natural Woman”) 

95) Metonymy

Redcoats (in reference to British soldiers) 

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)96) Polyptoton

“I’ll look to like, if looking liking move”

Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet Act 1 Scene 3 

97) Paradox (specifically, an OXYMORON)

I always thought the name of the late rapper, Biggie Smalls, was a paradox.
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Julia Vanlerberghe

98) paradox: One of my students: "The only thing worth dying for is life." Dave Matthews Band (From song "I'll Back You Up): And I know You're the heaviest weight When you're not here That's hung around my head.

99) irony: from RENT (From song "What You Own") "The filmmaker cannot see/ And the songwriter cannot hear"

(don't know about this one)maxim: said by Adolf Hitler: "What luck for rulers that men don't think."

100) metaphor: from Dave Matthews Band song "So Much to Say": "My hell is a closet I'm stuck inside Can't see the light And my heaven is a nice house in the sky It's got central heating, and I'm alright."

101) metonymy: Shakespeare (From "The Winter's Tale," IV, i.) "The crown will find an heir" (crown instead of the sovereign)

102) mondegreen: "I'll never leave your pizza burning" for "I'll never be your beast of burden" (by Rolling Stones--"Beast of Burden"   I guess parodies of songs would not count? The students I was with this week kept singing a Tenacious D knock off of "Zoot Suit Riot" by the Cherry Poppin' Daddies by singing "Grapefruit Diet"

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)103) parallelism: from Edna St. Vincent Millay's "I, Being Born a Woman and Distressed": "To clarify the pulse and cloud the mind"

104) paralepsis: Edna St. Vincent Millay, from "Pity Me Not": "Pity me not because the light of day/At close of day no longer walks the sky."

105) pleonasm: The Beatles: "I think we're alone now."  (Not a critical point, but are you referring to the Ritchie Cordell song popularized in 1967 by Tommy James and later re-made by the dreadful Tiffany?)

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)106) prolepsis: Juliet on the balcony from Romeo and Juliet: "Or, if thou wilt not/Be but sworn my love/And I'll no longer be a Capulet."

107) running style: From e.e. cummings' "anyone lived in a pretty how town": "anyone lived in a pretty how town/(with up so floating many bells down)/spring summer autumn winter/he sang his didn't he danced his did."

108) simile: from Counting Crows "Round Here"): "Step out the front door like a ghost into a fog Where no one notices the contrast of white on white."

109) syllepsis: He forgot his scarf and his manners.

110) synechdoche: from William Cowper's "On the Loss of the Royal George": "Toll for the brave! The brave that are no more, All sunk beneath the wave" (The wave would represent the ocean.)

I used a reference book for some help with a couple of these, Poetry Handbook: A Dictionary of Terms, by Babette Deutsch.

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Arthur Tanny

 111) Metonym: 

"Think outside of the Bun."  -Taco Bell commercial  

112) Parallelism: 

"A time to weep and a time to laugh;

A time to mourn and a time to dance; "

-Ecclesiastes 3:4  

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)113) Paradox 

War is peace

Freedom is slavery

Ignorance is strength 

-George Orwell 1984 

114) Paronomasia (broadly--more specifically, a kind of syllepsis)

Don’t get Mad, Get Glad!

-Glad trash bag commercial 

115) Polyptoton  

"Winners never quit and quitters never win."

-anon
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Tanja Supon

1, 2, & 3) "Pie Problem" by Shel Silverstein

If I eat one more piece of pie, I'll die!                           116)  (invective)

If I can't have one more piece of pie, I'll die!

So since it's all decided I must die,

I might as well have one more piece of pie.                   117) (periphrasis)

MMMM-OOOH-MY!

Chomp-Gulp-'Bye                                          118)  (onomatopoeia)

4)  "If"- by Rudyard Kipling  

If you can keep your head when all about you

Are losing theirs and blaming it on you;

But make allowance for their doubting too;

If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,

Or, being lied about, don’t deal in lies               119) (polyptoton)

Or being hated, don’t give way to hating,          (polyptoton)

And yet don’t look too good, nor talk too wise;

 

5) "Eldorado" by Edgar Allan Poe

 Gaily bedight,                      (RHYME)     120)  (paramoisosis)
A gallant knight,

In sunshine and in shadow,

Had journeyed long,

Singing a song,                         (paramoisosis)

In search of Eldorado

 

But he grew old-                         (paramoisosis)

This knight so bold-

And o’er his heart a shadow

Fell as he found                           (paramoisosis)

No spot of ground

That looked like Eldorado. 

And, as his strength

Hailed him at length,

He met a pilgrim shadow-

‘Shadow,’ said he,

‘Where can it be –

This land of Eldorado?’ 

‘Over the Mountains

Of the Moon,

Down the Valley of the Shadow,

Ride, boldly ride,’

The shade replied, -

‘If you seek for Eldorado.’
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"Kelley Sanders" 

121) Metaphor: "Life's but a walking shadow; a poor player, That struts and frets his hour upon the stage." Shakespeare, Macbeth

122) Simile:"Reason is to faith as the eye to the telescope." D. Hume

123) Maxim: "There is no I in team." From a poster in an elementary school classroom

124) Hyperbole:"I love you with all of my heart and soul." From a love letter to my boyfriend.

125) Onomatopeia:"bark" (the sound a dog makes, not tree-skin)
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Katie Sanders

126) Tricolon- “Mindernickel’s appearance is striking, bizarre and ridiculous.” (Death in Venice, Mann)

127) Invented Ethos- “ He had his doubts about Crake’s honorableness, intellectual or otherwise. He knew a bit more about Crake than his mother did.” (Oryx and Crake, Atwood)  (INVENTED ETHOS emerges from the speaker's own words--not from what others say about him or her.)

128) Ploce or 129) Polyptoton-“ You think I was thinking? She said. Oh Jimmy! You always think everyone is thinking. Maybe I was thinking anything.” (Oryx and Crake, Atwood) 

130) Phatic Communion- “So, what have you been up too?” 

131) Synathroesmus- “She was annoying, obnoxious, ugly and stupid all at the same time.” (me, describing someone.)
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Oakley Julian

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)132) Hyperbaton

“Why should their liberty than ours be more?”

(Shakespeare’s The Comedy of Errors spoken by Adriana) 

133) Hypocrisis

“The town crier’s call of ‘Hear ye! Hear Ye!’ was the colonial equivalent of today’s ‘Fox News Alert,’ only without a shrieking metallic sound effect akin to fingernails scratching a chalkboard in hell.”

(From America (The Book):  A Citizen’s Guide to Democracy Inaction By Jon Stewart, Ben Karlin, and David Javerbaum) 

134) Meiosis

spic/spick/spik for a Hispanic person 

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)135) Parataxis  (Good: the list structure is inherently paratactic.)

“But for most of us, there are some obvious associations with the word “bitch”:   stiletto heels and dark demimonde eyes on recent runways; the Gorgon-like horror produced movies like Fatal Attraction and The Hand That Rocks the Cradle, the evil of bland ambition in To Die For and Disclosure, the chilly allure of films like Body Heat and Basic Instinct; the cool badness and icy manipulation of all of Sharon Stone’s roles, of her grande dame style, of her refusal to return the diamond necklace to Harry Winston after the Oscars; the calamitous onstage presence and offstage existence of Courtney Love, which have allowed her to realize in real life a character that Madonna in her mock bravado could only dream of; Roseanne’s habit of saying things like “All women should kill their husbands”; the icy young blondes of the Grand Old Party; the gabby and acerbic pundits (or “pundettes,” as they’ve been diminutively called) with long legs in short skirts as a commentator on CBS or MSNBC; Shannon Doherty’s reckless behavior and brattiness that caused an ex-fiance to get a restraining order against her and some anti-fans to create the I Hate Brenda Newsletter; or the simple fact that the much-maligned model Naomi Campbell, dropped by Elite because “no money or prestige could further justify the abuse that has been imposed on [those she worked with],” simply said in response to her dismissal, “I’m a hardworking bitch.  I do what I want to do.  Life is too short- you have to go for it.”

(Bitch:   In Praise of Difficult Women By:  Elizabeth Wurtzel)   

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)136) Pleonasm

“It’s déjà vu all over again”

(Yogi Berra) 

Or a premeditated plan
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Dee Dee Coursey 

The Rock of Rhetoric – or - Rhetoric Rocks (paronomasia)

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)137.  Example of tricolon – Series of three members.   

And you run and you run to catch up with the sun but it's sinking.
Racing around to come up behind you again.
The sun is the same in a relative way but you're older.
Shorter of breath and one day closer to death.
- - - Pink Floyd lyrics from "Time"  

rtarrow.gif (262 bytes)138)            Example of homoioiteleuton – Similar sound pattern at ends of words.   

The hypocrites are slandering
The sacred halls of Truth
Ancient nobles showering
Their bitterness on youth
Can't we find
The minds that made us strong
Can't we learn
To feel what's right and wrong
- - - Rush lyrics from "A Farewell To Kings" 

139)  Example of Isocolon – A succession of phrases of approximately equal length and corresponding structure.

Also of 140) litotes – the expression of an affirmative by the negation of its opposition

I don't believe in destiny or the guiding hand of fate
I don't believe in forever, or love as a mystical state
I don't believe in the stars or the planets
or angels watching from above
But I believe there's a ghost of a chance
we can find someone to love
and make it last.
- - - Rush lyrics from "Ghost Of A Chance" 

141).  Example of paromoisosis – Parallelism of sound between the words of two clauses approximately equal in size.  Also of 142) polypototon – Repetition of words derived from the same root but with different endings.

You can choose a ready guide
In some celestial voice.
If you choose not to decide
You still have made a choice.
You can choose from phantom fears
And kindness that can kill
I will choose a path that's clear
I will choose Freewill
- - - Rush lyrics from  "Permanent Waves" 

143).  Example of paronomasia – Punning, playing with words.    

Hello, is there anybody in there?
Just nod if you can hear me
- - -  Pink Floyd lyrics from "Comfortably Numb"
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TERMS A-G BEGIN HERE.
TERMS H-Z CONTINUE HERE.


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English 5730 is taught by Dr. Richard Nordquist.
Armstrong Atlantic State University
                    
updated 05 March 2005