updated 25 February 2005
EVALUATING EXAMPLES OF RHETORICAL TERMS:
STANDOUTS AND PUZZLERS (2005)
Peer evaluations of examples of rhetorical terms (A-G and H-Z).
Nordquist
Oakley Julian
Julian Vanlerberghe
Alicia Ferrell
Dee Dee Coursey
Tanja Supon
Arthur C. Tanny
Kirsten Mullis
Shelly Rhodes
Patrice Beavers
Kelley Sanders
Chris Shirley
Pamela Yoko Melton
Jolene Burge
Rob Thomas
Heather Glover*
Chris McCormick
Ariana Siennick
Kasey Ray
* Heather Glover's work has been awarded the prize for RHETORICAL COMPETITION #2.
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Date Posted: 12:13:47 02/21/05 Mon
Author: Chris Shirley
Subject: Re: Terms Exercise
In reply to: Chris Shirley 's message, "Terms
Exercise" on 12:11:47 02/21/05 Mon
Standouts:
15. Epimone.
This really shows how rhetorical tropes are
everywhere, even in childrens books.
139. Isolcolon 140. Litotes.
I just liked it. It was a nice example
150. Invective
These are great examples; they show the diversity of
invective.
Puzzlers:
33. Antithesis
Is this really antithesis? It is not exactly opposites.
126. Tricolon
Is this polysendetic or asyndetic? Can it be neither?
178.Hypophora
The questions are not really answered. Is it still
hypophora if they are not answered?
Date Posted: 19:27:43 02/19/05 Sat
Author: Nordquist
Subject: Re: Terms Exercise
In reply to: Julia Vanlerberghe 's message, "Terms Exercise" on 15:10:52
02/19/05 Sat
>Puzzlers:
>
>#6: Bdelygmia I thought it had to be a lot of
>insults, piled up on top of one another, more than
>just one comparison.
BDELYGMIA (which comes from the Greek word for "nausea, sickness, filth,
nastiness") illustrates how difficult it can be to pin down some of these terms
precisely. At different times, different writers have used them in slightly different
ways.
Example #6 (which has been imported from another glossary of terms, Silvae Rhetoricae at
http://humanities.byu.edu/rhetoric/Figures/B/bdelygmia.htm )
illustrates one conventional definition of the term as "an expression of
hatred." But as Julia points out correctly (and as discussed in class), we've
followed the lead of some Renaissance rhetoricians and broadened the term (in fact,
merging it with two Latin terms, abominatio and apodioxis) to mean an extended verbal
attack ("litany of abuse").
Thus, bdelygmia [with or without the "i"] is a kind of emotional appeal which
might include examples of tapinosis and/or sarcasmus (i.e., sarcasm--"a bitter jibe
or taunt").
Btw, a much nicer rhetorical strategy (in some ways the opposite of bdelygmia) is
"philophronesis," defined by Lanham as an "attempt to mitigate anger by
gentle speech and humble submission."
Date
Posted: 15:55:04 02/19/05 Sat
Author: Nordquist
Subject: More on CROTS (Re: Terms Exercise)
In reply to: Oakley Julian 's message, "Terms
Exercise" on 10:05:21 02/19/05 Sat
>Puzzlers
>Term #75 Crot
>Its not so much that I am puzzled by the example, as
>I am the term. We havent really dealt so much with
>crot, yet, so I dont really know what it looks
>like. So, for all I know, this may be a perfect
>example.
CROT. (from Winston Weathers) A crot (crots, plural) is an obsolete word meaning
bit or fragment. The term was given new life by Tom Wolfe in his
Introduction to a collection of Esquire magazine fiction, The Secret Life of
Our Times, edited by Gordon Lish (New York: Doubleday, 1973). A basic element in the
alternate grammar of style, and comparable somewhat to the stanza in poetry,
the crot may range in length from one sentence to twenty or thirty sentences. It is
fundamentally an autonomous unit, characterized by the absence of any transitional devices
that might relate it to preceding or subsequent crots and because of this independent and
discrete nature of crots, they create a general effect of metastasis using that
term from classical rhetoric to label, as Fritz Senn recently suggested in the James Joyce
Quarterly (Summer, 1975), any rapid transition from one point of view to
another. In its most intense form, the crot is characterized by a certain abruptness
in its termination: As each crot breaks off, Tom Wolfe says, it tends to
make ones mind search for some point that must have just been made presque
vu! almost seen! In the hands of a writer who really understands the device, it
will have you making crazy leaps of logic, leaps you never dreamed of before.
The provenance of the crot may well be in the writers note itself
in the research note, in the sentence or two one jots down to record a moment or an idea
or to describe a person or place. The crot is essentially the note left free
of verbal ties with other surrounding notes.
The crots, of whatever kind, may be presented in nearly random sequence or in
sequences that finally suggest circularity. Rarely is any stronger sense of order (such as
would be characteristic of traditional grammar) imposed on them though the absence
of traditional order is far more pronounced when the grammar is used in fiction and
poetry. The general idea of unrelatedness present in crot writing suggests correspondence
for those who seek it with the fragmentation and even egalitarianism of
contemporary experience, wherein the events, personalities, places of life have no
particular superior or inferior status to dictate priorities of presentation. Nearly
always crots are separated one from the other by white space, and at times each crot is
given a number or, upon rare occasion, a title. That little spectrum white space
only, white space plus a numbering, white space plus a titling provides a writer
with a way of indicating an increase in separation, discreteness, isolation.. . .
Crots are akin, obviously, to a more general kind of block writing the
kind of writing found, for instance, in E. M. Forsters Two Cheers for Democracy and
in Katherine Anne Porters essay Audubons Happy Land. In such block
writing, the authors have strung together short, fairly discrete units of composition to
make whole compositions. Likewise, a series of crots is not unlike a collection of
aphorisms say those of Eric Hoffer who, in a book like The Passionate State of Mind
and Other Aphorisms, has brought together brief compositional units, some a sentence long,
some several paragraphs long, each quite distinct from the other, yet grouped into a whole
composition on the basis of a certain attitude and view of life common to them all. These
compositions of blocks or aphorisms are so much in the spirit of
crot writing that they may be considered a part of its development out of a traditional
grammar of style into the alternate grammar. The writing of Forster, Porter, and Hoffer
in fiction and nonfiction gives evidence of the usefulness of something
other than the ordered linear procedure of traditional grammar even to writers who would
not be identified as especially experimental or stylistically daring. (Weathers, Winston.
The Grammars of Style: New Options in Composition. Freshman English News 4.3
(Winter 1976): 14, 12-18. Reprinted in Richard Graves Rhetoric and Composition: A
Sourcebook for Teachers and Writers. 3rd ed. Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook, Heinemann,
1990. 200-214)
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English 5730 is taught by Dr. Richard
Nordquist.
Armstrong Atlantic State University
updated 25 February 2005