
Neutering Exercise (Spring 2005)
Neutralizing Exercises have been posted in the order in which they were
received.
In several cases, original formatting has been lost, and texts get a little messy.
Sorry!
-Emily Dickinson, Poem 199
(Christi Healan)
-Wordsworth, "The Idiot
Boy" (tsupon21@comcast.net)
-Countee Cullen, "Yet Do I
Marvel" (Heather Glover)
-Sylvia Plath, "Tulips"
(Pamela Melton)
-Shakespeare, excerpt from King
Henry V (Arthur Tanney)
-E. A. Poe, "The Raven"
(Shelley Rhodes)
-Jim Morrison, "Ghost
Song" (Oakley Julian)
-Bruce Springsteen, "Thunder
Road" (Kirstin Mullis)
-Elizabeth Bishop, "One
Art" (Alicia Ferrell)
-Avril Lavigne, "I'm with
You" (Robtheringwraith@aol.com)
-The Pixies, "Nimrod's
Son" (Patrice Beavers)
-"Mary
Had a Little Lamb" (Kasey Ray)
-Andrew Marvell, "To His Coy
Mistress" (Katie Sanders)
-Incubus, "Drive"
(Dee Dee Coursey)
-John Keats, "Ode to a
Nightingale" (Chris McCormick)
-REO Speedwagon, "Can't
Fight This Feeling" (Kelley Sanders)
-Shakespeare, Sonnet 18
(Jolene Burge)
-William Blake, "The
Tyger" (Chris Shirley)
-Darrell Orrell,
"Baptism" (Ariana Siennick)
Mary had a little
lamb,
Mary owned a young lamb.
Its fleece was white as
snow.
The lamb's fur was white.
And everywhere that Mary
went,
The lamb followed Mary everywhere.
The lamb was sure to go.
It followed her to school one
day,
The lamb followed Mary to her school
That was agains the
rules;
whic h was against the rules.
It made the children laugh and
play, The
lamb caused the other children to
To see a lamb at
school.
misbehave at school.
And so the teacher turned it
out,
The teacher took the lamb outside
But still it lingered
near;
but it did not leave.
And waited patiently
about &
nbsp; The lamb waited for Mary to get out of school.
Till Mary did appear.
Why does the lamb love Mary
so?
"Why is the lamb attached to Mary?,"
The eager children
cry; asked
the children.
Why, Mary loves the lamb you
know, "Because Mary
loves the lamb," said their
The teacher did
reply.
teacher.
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To My Coy Mistress
by Andrew Marvell
My
Version
HAD we but world enough, and time,
|
If we had all of time in this world, |
This coyness, Lady,
were no crime |
The resistance you show would not a crime.
|
We would sit down and
think which way |
We would sit and think about what we could do |
To walk and pass our
long love's day. |
We would walk around and pass the day. |
Thou by the Indian
Ganges' side |
If you were on the
banks of the Indian Gange river |
Shouldst rubies find:
I by the tide |
And found rubies: If I were by the
shore |
Of |
Of the |
Love you ten years
before the Flood, |
Love you for years before we met, |
And you should, if you
please, refuse |
And if you want to resist |
Till the conversion of
the Jews. |
Until the end of time. |
My vegetable love
should grow |
My love will continue to grow |
Vaster than empires,
and more slow; |
Greater than empires, and yet slower; |
An hundred years
should go to praise |
Because for many years I will give you praise |
Thine eyes and on thy
forehead gaze; |
I will look at your eyes and look at
your forehead |
Two hundred to adore
each breast, |
I will look at each of your breasts for
a long time |
But thirty thousand to
the rest; |
The rest of your body is where I spend most of my time |
An age at least to
every part, |
I will spend a lot of time on every part of your body, |
And the last age
should show your heart. |
And then, I will spend the most time on your heart. |
For, Lady, you deserve
this state, |
You, my Lady deserve this treatment,
|
Nor would I love at
lower rate. |
And I would not give you less than you deserve. |
But at my
back I always hear |
Yet, I have this voice in my head telling me |
Time's wingèd chariot
hurrying near; |
That time is short and passes quickly; |
And yonder all before
us lie |
And who knows what can happen |
Deserts of vast
eternity. |
We could die at any moment. |
Thy beauty shall no
more be found, |
If you died you would not be beautiful anymore, |
Nor, in thy marble
vault, shall sound |
And in the grave, you would not hear |
My echoing song: then
worms shall try |
The
words that I want to tell you: then worms will examine |
That long preserved
virginity, |
The virginity that you so protect, |
And your quaint honour
turn to dust, |
Will not matter anymore, |
And into ashes all my
lust: |
And all of my feelings will have died: |
The grave 's a fine
and private place, |
Death is okay and all, |
But none, I think, do
there embrace. |
But, I believe, everyone is alone in their grave. |
Now
therefore, while the youthful hue |
So, while youth and beauty |
Sits on thy skin like
morning dew, |
Sits on your skin lightly, |
And while thy willing
soul transpires |
And while you resist your feelings |
At every pore with
instant fires, |
All of your skin desires it, |
Now let us sport us
while we may, |
We should have sex as soon as possible, |
And now, like amorous
birds of prey, |
And so, we should lustfully attack each other, |
Rather at once our
time devour |
Instead of wasting our time |
Than languish in his
slow-chapt power. |
Waiting for things to happen. |
Let us roll all our
strength and all |
So we should focus all of our energies, |
Our sweetness up into
one ball, |
All of our emotions in to one thing, |
And tear our pleasures
with rough strife |
And let all of our desires out, passionately |
Thorough the iron
gates of life: |
It is only though living we learn |
Thus, though we cannot
make our sun |
That, even though we dont make life |
Stand still, yet we
will make him run. |
Slow down, we will fill our lives while we can. |
Drive Original song lyrics by Incubus
Neutered version by Dee Dee Coursey
(Original lines appear in plain text; neutered lines follow in bold):
Sometimes, I feel the fear of uncertainty stinging clear
At
times, I experience painfully strong feelings of fear from doubt or mistrust
And I cant help but ask myself how much Ill let the fear take the wheel and steer
And
I am irresistibly drawn to questioning of myself whether or not I will let such fear
control my life
Its driven me before, and it seems to have a vague, haunting mass appeal.
The
fear caused by uncertainty has controlled my life previously, and the urge to given in
seems to hold an imperceptible large attraction
But lately I am beginning to find out that I should be the one behind the wheel
However,
recently I have begun to realize that I need to take control of my own life
Whatever tomorrow brings, Ill be there with open arms and open eyes.
Therefore,
despite the doubts and unknowns I face, I will not run away from life
So if I decide to waiver my chance to be one of the hive
So,
if I choose to pass up the chance to be a follower
Will I choose water over wine and hold my own and drive?
Will
I opt to be clear-headed and remain sure of myself while taking control of my life?
Its driven me before, and it seems to be the way that everyone else gets around.
The
fear caused by uncertainty has controlled my life previously, and it appears to be how all
others run their lives.
But lately Im beginning to find that when I drive myself my light is found
However,
recently I have begun to realize that, in order to see my way more clearly, I need to take
control of my own life
So whatever tomorrow brings, Ill be there with open arms and open eyes.
Therefore, despite the doubts and unknowns I face, I will not run away from the life
Would you kill the Queen to crush the hive?
Would
you put to death the leader just so you can also subdue the followers?
Would you choose water over wine hold the wheel and drive?
Would
you choose clarity over fog... control your fears and take ownership of your life?
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Neutering Exercise (2005) concludes here.
Neutering Exercise (2005) begins
here.