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Neutering Exercise (Spring 2005)
Neutralizing Exercises have been posted in the order in which they were received. 
In several cases, original formatting has been lost, and texts get a little messy.   Sorry!


-Emily Dickinson, Poem 199 (Christi Healan)
-Wordsworth, "The Idiot Boy" (tsupon21@comcast.net)
-Countee Cullen, "Yet Do I Marvel" (Heather Glover)
-Sylvia Plath, "Tulips" (Pamela Melton)
-Shakespeare, excerpt from King Henry V (Arthur Tanney)
-E. A. Poe, "The Raven" (Shelley Rhodes)

-Jim Morrison, "Ghost Song" (Oakley Julian)
-Bruce Springsteen, "Thunder Road" (Kirstin Mullis)
-Elizabeth Bishop, "One Art" (Alicia Ferrell)
-Avril Lavigne, "I'm with You" (Robtheringwraith@aol.com)
-The Pixies, "Nimrod's Son" (Patrice Beavers)

-"Mary Had a Little Lamb" (Kasey Ray)
-Andrew Marvell, "To His Coy Mistress" (Katie Sanders)
-Incubus, "Drive" (Dee Dee Coursey)

-John Keats, "Ode to a Nightingale" (Chris McCormick)
-REO Speedwagon, "Can't Fight This Feeling" (Kelley Sanders)
-Shakespeare, Sonnet 18 (Jolene Burge)
-William Blake, "The Tyger" (Chris Shirley)
-Darrell Orrell, "Baptism" (Ariana Siennick)


Kasey Ray

Mary had a little lamb,                                Mary owned a young lamb.
Its fleece was white as snow.                      The lamb's fur was white.
And everywhere that Mary went,                  The lamb followed Mary everywhere.
The lamb was sure to go.

It followed her to school one day,                 The lamb followed Mary to her school
That was agains the rules;                           whic h was against the rules.
It made the children laugh and play,             The lamb caused the other children to  
To see a lamb at school.                             misbehave at school.

And so the teacher turned it out,                  The teacher took the lamb outside
But still it lingered near;                               but it did not leave.
And waited patiently about                         & nbsp; The lamb waited for Mary to get out of school.
Till Mary did appear.

Why does the lamb love Mary so?                "Why is the lamb attached to Mary?,"
The eager children cry;                                 asked the children.
Why, Mary loves the lamb you know,            "Because Mary loves the lamb," said their
The teacher did reply.                                  teacher.

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Katherine Sanders

“To My Coy Mistress”   by Andrew Marvell                                My Version

 

HAD we but world enough, and time,               

       If we had all of time in this world,  

This coyness, Lady, were no crime

      The resistance you show would not a crime.                    

We would sit down and think which way

      We would sit and think about what we could do   

To walk and pass our long love's day.

      We would walk around and pass the day.

Thou by the Indian Ganges' side

      If you were on  the banks of the Indian Gange river

Shouldst rubies find: I by the tide

      And found rubies: If I were by the shore

Of Humber would complain. I would

Of the Humber, away from you, I would complain. I would

Love you ten years before the Flood,

      Love you for years before we met,

And you should, if you please, refuse

     And if you want to resist

Till the conversion of the Jews.

     Until the end of time.

My vegetable love should grow

     My love will continue to grow

Vaster than empires, and more slow;

     Greater than empires, and yet slower;

An hundred years should go to praise

     Because for many years I will give you praise

Thine eyes and on thy forehead gaze;

     I will look at your eyes and look at your forehead

Two hundred to adore each breast,

     I will look at each of your breasts for a long time

But thirty thousand to the rest;

    The rest of your body is where I spend most of my time

An age at least to every part,

     I will spend a lot of time on every part of your body,

And the last age should show your heart.

    And then, I will spend the most time on your heart.

For, Lady, you deserve this state,

    You, my Lady deserve this treatment,           

Nor would I love at lower rate.

    And I would not give you less than you deserve.

  But at my back I always hear

    Yet, I have this voice in my head telling me

Time's wingèd chariot hurrying near;

    That time is short and passes quickly;

And yonder all before us lie

    And who knows what can happen

Deserts of vast eternity.

    We could die at any moment.

Thy beauty shall no more be found,

     If you died you would not be beautiful anymore,

Nor, in thy marble vault, shall sound

     And in the grave, you would not hear

My echoing song: then worms shall try

 The words that I want to tell you: then worms will examine

That long preserved virginity,

     The virginity that you so protect,

And your quaint honour turn to dust,

     Will not matter anymore,

And into ashes all my lust:

     And all of my feelings will have died:

The grave 's a fine and private place,

     Death is okay and all,

But none, I think, do there embrace.

     But, I believe, everyone is alone in their grave.

  Now therefore, while the youthful hue

     So, while youth and beauty

Sits on thy skin like morning dew,

     Sits on your skin lightly,

And while thy willing soul transpires

     And while you resist your feelings

At every pore with instant fires,

     All of your skin desires it,

Now let us sport us while we may,

     We should have sex as soon as possible,

And now, like amorous birds of prey,

     And so, we should lustfully attack each other,

Rather at once our time devour

     Instead of wasting our time

Than languish in his slow-chapt power.

     Waiting for things to happen.

Let us roll all our strength and all

     So we should focus all of our energies,

Our sweetness up into one ball,

     All of our emotions in to one thing,

And tear our pleasures with rough strife

     And let all of our desires out, passionately

Thorough the iron gates of life:

     It is only though living we learn

Thus, though we cannot make our sun

     That, even though we don’t make life

Stand still, yet we will make him run.

     Slow down, we will fill our lives while we can.

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 Dee Dee Coursey

“Drive” – Original song lyrics by Incubus

‘Neutered’ version by Dee Dee Coursey

 

(Original lines appear in plain text; ‘neutered’ lines follow in bold): 

 

Sometimes, I feel the fear of uncertainty stinging clear

At times, I experience painfully strong feelings of fear from doubt or mistrust

 

And I can’t help but ask myself how much I’ll let the fear take the wheel and steer

And I am irresistibly drawn to questioning of myself whether or not I will let such fear control my life

 

It’s driven me before, and it seems to have a vague, haunting mass appeal.

The fear caused by uncertainty has controlled my life previously, and the urge to given in seems to hold an imperceptible large attraction

 

But lately I am beginning to find out that I should be the one behind the wheel

However, recently I have begun to realize that I need to take control of my own life

 

Whatever tomorrow brings, I’ll be there with open arms and open eyes.

Therefore, despite the doubts and unknowns I face, I will not run away from life

 

So if I decide to waiver my chance to be one of the hive

So, if I choose to pass up the chance to be a follower

 

Will I choose water over wine and hold my own and drive?

Will I opt to be clear-headed and remain sure of myself while taking control of my life?

 

It’s driven me before, and it seems to be the way that everyone else gets around. ‘

The fear caused by uncertainty has controlled my life previously, and it appears to be how all others run their lives.

 

But lately I’m beginning to find that when I drive myself my light is found

However, recently I have begun to realize that, in order to see my way more clearly, I need to take control of my own life

 

So whatever tomorrow brings, I’ll be there with open arms and open eyes.

Therefore, despite the doubts and unknowns I face, I will not run away from the  life

Would you kill the Queen to crush the hive?

Would you put to death the leader just so you can also subdue the followers?

 

Would you choose water over wine…hold the wheel and drive?

Would you choose clarity over fog... control your fears and take ownership of your life?

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Neutering Exercise (2005) concludes here.
Neutering Exercise (2005) begins here.