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POSTSCRIPT: 24 January 2005 (Monday)
--ETHOS, PATHOS, LOGOS. We revisited Aristotle's concepts of ethos, pathos,
and logos (as well as distinctions that have been drawn between invented and situated ethos)
and looked at how these artful strategies were employed by Gary Hart in the 1987 speech in
which he announced his withdrawal from the race for the Democratic nomination for
president. Consider how some of these same strategies are also employed in a "personal" letter generated
by Publishers Clearing
House.
--RHETORIC OF THE WORD. By
now you should be familiar with the terms denotation
and connotation (more complex discussion here), euphemism (and while we're at
it, dysphemism: a nastier way of expressing something; a word used as a weapon
against others, or as a release valve for anxiety and frustration), etymology, and (most
importantly) metaphor.
For examples of the rhetoric of individual words (and of word clusters), check out
the following (purely optional):
-"What Those Code
Words in Personal Ads Really Mean"
-"The
Other War--The One of Words," by Bruce Lincoln.
--SPREZZATURA. Our word
of the day.
PREVIEW: 24 and 26 January (Mon. & Wed.)
-- CHAPTER TWO of Ancient Rhetorics. To deepen
your understanding of the rhetorical concept of kairos
(see the example of "A Daughter's Letter Home" in our online glossary), read Eric Charles White's explanation
of this Greek term and its metaphorical etymology. Note that the adjective form
of kairos is kairotic.
-- RHETORICAL POINT TO PONDER. In the popular press, the word rhetoric (in
the narrow sense of political posturing or "mere talk") is often contrasted
(unfavorably) with action. Consider, however, the role of rhetoric
(including visual rhetoric
and kairos) in
harnessing the worldwide response to the recent tsunami disaster. In what ways, for
instance, was the U.S. Government motivated to increase its tsunami aid pledge from $15
million to $35 million to $350 million within one week? If you made a personal
contribution, consider what information and/or images specifically motivated you to act.
Rather than view rhetoric and action as distinct activities, it
might be more beneficial to think about the relationship between rhetoric and
action.
-- RHETORICAL ANALYSIS. In the first week of
term, we spoke briefly about the basic
characteristics of analysis: "show me" and
"so what?" That is, "show me" (or "point out") what you think are the significant details in
the text (or speech or movie or ad or supermarket--or whatever it is you're
analyzing); and then, regarding each of those points, answer the question, "So what?"--- so what is
the significance of each detail? What effect does that detail create
(or attempt to create)? How does it shape (or attempt to shape) the reader's
response? How does it work in concert with other details to create effects
and shape the reader's response? In a rhetorical analysis, of course, the
"details" will include the rhetorical strategies and stylistic devices
identified in our course text and in our glossary.
This Wednesday, you'll be submitting your first rhetorical analysis--of a print
advertisement. It's a warm-up exercise rather than a major course project;
nonetheless, it should demonstrate your ability to analyze and to think rhetorically.
When composing an analysis, presume (unless you're instructed
otherwise) that your reader is already familiar with the text (or whatever manner of
discourse) that you're analyzing. In other words, there's no need to summarize
something for its own sake: your reader can see the ad, read the poem, hear the
speech. Your job is first to direct the reader's attention to key details
("show me") and then explain why each of those details is significant ("so
what?"). Because our primary objective in this class is to be able to compose
thoughtful and thought-provoking rhetorical analyses, it's essential that we first have
the tools to do the job and that we understand the fundamental nature of analysis.
Feel free to take
advantage of any (or all) of the following online tools as you work on your ad analysis
(see ASSIGNMENTS for Jan. 26): Rhetorical
Analysis Worksheet; The
Concepts of Rhetoric, by Henry Jankiewicz; Learning How to Identify
the Three Main Rhetorical Styles.
-- RHETORIC OF THE WORD. As we saw in our discussion of metaphor and etymology,
individual words as well as complete texts are rhetorical. This week we'll examine
the power of a word's connotations
in determining its effects on readers.
-- CHAPTER FIVE of Ancient
Rhetorics. It would be worthwhile to study Chapter Five before you
complete your rhetorical analysis of a print ad: most ads rely on some sort of
logical appeal (in addition to appeals to ethos and pathos). Give
special attention to the discussion of enthymemes (pp. 141-146): you can view the
notorious "Willie
Horton ad" (analyzed in this section of Chapter Five) at the Living
Room Candidate site for 1988 (click on the final thumbnail in the Republican column).
By now you should also also have a fundamental understanding of the rhetorical
functions of induction,
deduction, examples, analogies, maxims, and signs.
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POSTSCRIPT: 19 January (Wednesday)

WHY STUDY RHETORIC?:
the open hand vs. the closed fist (Zeno). We considered this question in light of
both our own experiences in today's world and those of the Greeks in 5th century B.C..
At the end of the semester, I'll have more to say about rhetoric as a distinctive
discipline and a subject for graduate study, but if you're curious about the recently
revitalized interdisciplinary role of rhetoric, good starting points would include visits
to the Rhetoric Society of America, the International Society for the History of Rhetoric,
and the American Society for the History of Rhetoric.
(At this last site, btw, you'll find the allegorical medieval image of Lady Rhetoric.)
For a less formal glimpse into the world of rhetorical studies, you might want to
check out the blogora ("a public
blogspace about rhetoric and rhetoricians").
-- CLASSIC RHETORIC: Plato's views. In concert with
Chapter One of our text, we looked at excerpts from Plato's Gorgias and Phaedrus. We
considered how the character of Socrates (himself a master rhetorician--though a
firm opponent of the Sophists--quickly puts the Sophists at a disadvantage in Gorgias
by manipulating the rhetorical situation to favor his own (Socratic) method.
Understanding why Plato opposed Athenian democracy should help us to appreciate, in part,
why he also opposed the Sophists and the teaching of rhetoric. In fact, both Plato
and Aristotle opposed democracy, though for different reasons.
The Gorgias also raises ethical questions about the
teachings of the Sophists (e.g., does the ability to argue both sides of an issue signal
an indifference to truth?) and asks how a discipline such as rhetoric can even be
considered a "discipline" if it has no subject matter. (These are issues
that Aristotle takes up in a markedly different fashion in the Rhetoric.)
In addition, Plato charged: (1) rhetoric is the simple knack of producing pleasure; (2) it
is merely a species of flattery; and (3) the power to move minds is evil since it often
feeds on the ignorance of the audience. To place this evening's excerpts in context,
please read this quick
summary of Gorgias. (Purely optional:
the SparkNotes site
also contains a more detailed analysis of each section of the Gorgias; Plato's complete text is also available
online.)
In Phaedrus, a later work by Plato, the character of
Socrates recalls the legend of Theuth as a means of questioning the
value of the new technology of writing ("a recipe for forgetting") as
opposed to oral discourse. As discussed in our text, Phaedrus also
"hints at a true art of rhetoric" while proposing a kind of psychological analysis of human souls. In addition to reading
today's handout, please read this thoughtful summary
of the Phaedrus, with particular attention to Socrates' discussion of an
ideal rhetoric. (Purely
optional: the complete text of the Phaedrus is also online.)
Various scholars have suggested (perhaps simplistically) that Plato's Phaedrus
provides the foundation for Aristotle's Rhetoric. In any case, the Phaedrus
makes clear that Plato's opposition to the methods of the Sophists was not accompanied by
whole-hearted opposition to rhetoric itself.
-- ON THE ORIGINS OF RHETORIC. Recent scholarship (for example, Edward Schiappa's The
Beginnings of Rhetorical Theory in Classical Greece, 1999) has challenged (or at
least attempted to qualify) conventional views that western rhetoric was born with the
democratization of Syracuse, developed by the Sophists in a somewhat shallow way,
criticized by Plato in a somewhat impractical way, and rescued by Aristotle, whose Rhetoric
found the mean between Sophistic relativism and Platonic idealism. The Sophists
were, in fact, a rather disparate group of teachers, some of whom may have been
opportunistic hucksters and some of whom may have been closer in spirit and method to
Aristotle and other philosophers. In any case, the development of rhetoric in
5th-century B.C. certainly corresponded to the rise of the new legal system that
accompanied the "democratic government" (i.e., the several hundred men
who were defined as Athenian citizens) in parts of ancient Greece. (Keep in mind
that before the invention of lawyers, citizens represented themselves in the
Assembly--usually in front of sizeable juries.) It is believed that the
Sophists generally taught by example rather than precept; that is, they prepared and
delivered specimen speeches for their students to imitate. In any case, it's
difficult to identify anything like a common set of Sophistic rhetorical principles.
We do know a couple of things for certain: (1) that in the 4th century B.C.
Aristotle assembled the rhetorical handbooks that were then available into a collection
called the Synagoge Techne (now, unfortunately, lost); and (2) that his Rhetoric
(which is, in fact, a collection of lecture notes) is the earliest extant example
of a complete theory, or art, of rhetoric. Next week, our attention shifts to
Aristotle's Rhetoric. (To
get a head start, please check out these excerpts from Book I of the Rhetoric.)
--RHETORIC OF ADVERTISING.
In preparation for assignments
due next week, we revisited the concepts of visual metaphors and visual rhetoric, with particular
attention to the different kinds of ethical, pathetic, and logical appeals found in print
advertising and commercials. [Purely optional:
as a way to get ready for next week's work and to help learn some of our
rhetorical terms, you'll benefit, I think, by reading McQuarrie and Mick's online article "Figures of Rhetoric in
Advertising Language" (1996).]
--A FEW TERMS mentioned this evening: antithesis, chiasmus, copia, enthymeme, invented ethos and situated ethos, the five
canons (or divisions) of rhetoric,
artistic proofs, inartistic proofs, Ciceronian (style), .
Finally, how about a concise and engaging online lecture that covers many of the key
points raised in tonight's class? Please see Prof. Doris Werkman's lecture on "Artistic Proofs."
PREVIEW: 19 January (Wednesday)
-- CHAPTER ONE of Ancient Rhetorics. Make sure
that you're familiar with the authors' basic justifications for employing and for studying
rhetoric. Throughout the term, we'll be supplementing the brief section on
"History of Ancient Rhetorics" (pp. 7-16), but for now I'd like you to read this
short Georgia Tech page
on Sophism, with special attention to the sophist Gorgias.
-- PLATO on RHETORIC AND WRITING. This week, in
addition to reading about two of Plato's dialogues on rhetoric, we'll also be
looking at excerpts from the Gorgias and Phaedrus in class. Though
he argued against the Sophists, Plato himself was a consummate rhetorician. Be
prepared to explain that observation. (For those who have never read any of
Plato's dialogues before, check out this "Short
Biography of Plato.") Also, be prepared to summarize Plato's objections to
rhetoric (particularly as expressed in Gorgias) as well as his critique of the
new technology of writing and his vision of a "true art" of rhetoric (as
expressed in Phaedrus).
-- TERMS. Several key terms are
introduced in the first chapter of Ancient Rhetorics. Make sure that
you have at least a basic familiarity with the following (most of which also appear in our online glossary): commonplace, rhetor, rhetorician, rhetoric, rhetorical situation,
sophist, enthymeme, example, maxim, sign, style, invention, testimony, ethos, pathos, logos, the progymnasmata, and copia.
-- PLUS: This week we'll continue our
look at rhetorical
situations in everyday life and at visual
rhetorics, especially in the context of advertising.
POSTSCRIPT: 12 January (Wednesday)
--SYLLABUS & WEB SITE QUIZ: The purpose of the quiz (besides illustrating verbal irony) was to
emphasize the importance of reading and heeding the SYLLABUS and to outline some of my pet
professorial peeves: (1) ignoring information and resources on the course web site (check NEWS often--and then follow the
links); (2) arriving late to class; (3) whining (especially when it involves
references to bodily functions); (4) academic codependency; (5) cell phones; (6) spoiled
brats (of any age). A few more include (7) vague pronoun reference ("What is this?");
(8) the inability to punctuate
quotations (American style); and (9) top ten lists.
--TONIGHT'S TIP ON LEARNING THE TERMS. When a term is introduced in class (or in these NOTES or in either of our course texts),
make a point of trying to learn the term (and the concept behind it). Be
patient: your initial understanding may be fuzzy, but with additional practice, examples,
and discussion, the significance of the term should grow clear.
--ORALITY AND RHETORIC (the
origins of rhetoric, continued). Orality produces a ritualistic
kind of rhetoric based on repetition of similar performances in the present
time before an immediate audience of participants and listeners. The connections among speaker, message and
listener [i.e., the rhetorical
situation] are direct and personal. The message is conveyed in repetitive
or narrative increments and presents content that is familiar and that relates
directly to the experiences of the hearers. In oral cultures, people tend to
rely on sound devices as aids to memory (one of
the five offices of rhetoric)
and to favor paratactic (as
opposed to hypotactic)
sentence structures. [In our other course text, Analyzing Prose, Richard
Lanham has much more to say about that final point.] To be continued next Wednesday.
--TIP FOR CONDUCTING A RHETORICAL ANALYSIS. Keep in
mind the two related steps involved: "show me"
(e.g., "Dark is a metaphor") and "So
what?" (e.g., " . . . a conventional metaphor for death that parallels
the metaphorical 'night' in the poem's title and so on).
--"Do not go gentle into that good
night" (
):
In addition to examining a few of the rhetorical structures and sound devices (e.g., alliteration, assonance, rhyme, metaphor, simile, pun, oxymoron--along with personification, dehortatio, apostrophe, polyptoton, antithesis, et al.)
within Dylan Thomas's villanelle, we
briefly considered the effects of the rhetorical structure of the poem.
As we saw, a useful way of initiating a rhetorical analysis is to consider
alternatives: what if the writer had used this word (or phrase or structure) instead of
the word (or phrase or structure) he or she did use?
--VISUAL RHETORICS. In our
postmodern era, where increasingly language is subordinated to images, we need to adapt
rhetorical studies accordingly. Consider, for instance, how the visual metaphors in
these three ads (for Morgan
Stanley Dean Whitter, for the
Chevy Blazer, and for Depend Guards)
dominate the page, almost obscuring the text. In class, we considered the power of
the NIKE logo (scroll down to "Just Do It!" on the VISUAL RHETORICS page) and the evolving
nature of political advertising from Ike's
1952 campaign to Lyndon
Johnson's notorious "daisy commercial" in 1964. (If these links don't
take you directly to the clips, go to the home page of The Living Room Candidate,
click on "election year 1952" (and then 1964), and finally click on the
appropriate thumbnail. Of course, you must have a multimedia player such as the
RealPlayer or Windows Media.) We'll continue our discussion next week when we turn
to the rhetoric of advertising.
--AUDIO BONUS (purely optional--but
highly recommended). "Rhetoric": Originally broadcast on Oct. 28, 2004, this 45-minute BBC Radio program
provides a cogent panel discussion on the history of rhetoric, from its origins in
ancient Greece to the present. "Gorgias, the great sophist philosopher and
master of rhetoric said, 'Speech is a powerful lord that with the smallest and most
invisible body accomplished most godlike works. It can banish fear and remove grief, and
instill pleasure and enhance pity. Divine sweetness transmitted through words is inductive
of pleasure and reductive of pain.' But for Plato it was a vice, and those like
Gorgias who taught rhetoric were teaching the skills of lying in return for money and were
a great danger. He warned 'this device - be it which it may, art or mere artless
empirical knack - must not, if we can help it, strike root in our society.' But
strike root it did, and there is a rich tradition of philosophers and theologians who have
attempted to make sense of it. How did the art of rhetoric develop? What part
has it played in philosophy and literature? And does it still deserve the health
warning applied so unambiguously by Plato?" To listen to this excellent program
(which provides a perfect outline to our historical study of rhetoric), visit the BBC
Radio 4 "History
in Our Time" page and click on "Listen again."
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POSTSCRIPT: 10 January (Monday)
PREVIEW: 12 January (Wednesday)
-- THEORY AND PRACTICE. Don't hesitate to get a head
start on Chapter One of Ancient Rhetorics. While this text will provide us
with the theoretical and historical sides of rhetoric, our class work (along with Analyzing
Prose and some out-of-class work) will provide opportunities to put theory into
practice.
-- DEFINITIONS. After exchanging introductions at our
first class meeting today, we danced around some definitions of rhetoric (check out this collection of definitions at
Dr. Eskin's course site) and briefly considered the implications of rhetoric's origins in oral
cultures and the importance of memory
in those cultures. In Chapter Three of Orality
and Literacy (1982), Walter J. Ong lists some characteristics of the way people
in a "primary oral culture" think and express themselves through narrative:
1. Expression is additive (i.e, " . . . and . . . and . . . and . . .") rather
than subordinative.
2. It is aggregative (e.g., a reliance on epithets and on parallel and antithetical phrases) rather
than analytic.
3. It tends to be redundant or "copious."
4. Out of necessity, thought is conceptualized and then expressed with relatively close
reference to the human world.
6. Expression is agonistically
toned.
7. It is empathetic and participatory rather than objectively distanced.
8. It is situational rather than abstract.
Put simply, many of the stylistic traits that we'll be examining in this course once had a
very practical value: they helped people remember things.
-- ACCUMULATION.
To illustrate the point that rhetoric is an inherent part of our everyday lives, we
considered how accumulation,
the first term in our glossary, tends
to occur in a rhetorical
situation in which one person passes judgment on another by cataloging his or her
failures or achievements (the former is a type of invective; the latter
an example of encomium).
-- PROVERBS. In predominantly oral cultures, proverbs (also known as maxims) are convenient
vehicles for conveying simple beliefs and cultural attitudes.
-- METAPHOR. Of all the rhetorical and stylistic
devices that we'll be studying this term, the most prevalent is metaphor (sometimes
referred to as "the primary trope").
In Monday's class, we considered how many common English words are actually
"lost" or "buried" metaphors--including the word metaphor itself.
Using a good dictionary (such as the online Oxford
English Dictionary), check out the etymologies (or histories) of
each of the the following words to see how a literal reference has gained a figurative
meaning: ambition, astonish, disaster, escape, insult,
record, prestige. In addition, we considered how objects from
everyday life (a "crisp and tangy" apple, a soft drink [Moxie], a bottle of Viking
Blod) carry metaphorical meanings. Btw, it was Daniel Boorstin in a book published
over 40 years ago, The
Image: A Guide to Pseudo-Events in America, who first proposed that the cardboard
box has proved to be the most influential American invention of the past two centuries.
The packaging of products in the 19th century (which made possible branding
and advertising) led inexorably to the packaging of people and events in our own
time. (Purely optional, but worth the visit: an excerpt from Boorstin's The Image.)
-- ETHOS, PATHOS, LOGOS. The simple transaction of
borrowing a dollar served to illustrate three fundamental rhetorical concepts: ethos, pathos, and logos. (We'll have a lot more
to say about these "means of persuasion" in the weeks ahead.)
-- MORE NEW TERMS. Two other (related) terms introduced
on Monday evening: anaphora
and epiphora.
-- COMING SOON. On
Wednesday, as a way of demonstrating the prevalence of rhetoric in everyday life, we'll
listen to an excerpt from a George Carlin routine (excerpts here) and analyze a few TV
commercials.
-- TIP. Make sure that you've read the course SYLLABUS by Wednesday--and don't
forget to send me an e-mail.
English 5730 is taught by Dr. Richard Nordquist
Office of Liberal Studies (Solms 211)
Armstrong Atlantic State University
Savannah, Georgia 31419
912/921 5991
e-mail: engl5730@lycos.com

UPDATED
20 January 2006