English 5760

LITERARY NONFICTION
Dr. Richard Nordquist
Armstrong Atlantic State University
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Project #2

Travel Essay

First Draft Due for Peer Review in Class: September 29, 2008 (Please bring two hard copies to class for the peer review.)
Second Draft Due for Peer Review in Class: October 6, 2008 (Please bring two hard copies to class for the peer review.)
Last Day to Submit Editing Questions via Email: October 10, 2008
Final Revision Due (as Word doc attached to email): 8 p.m. on October 15

Optional Feedback on Topics and First Drafts: Feel free to send your topic ideas and/or a draft (or partial draft) up to and including the evening of September 26, 2008 as a Word doc attached to an e-mail sent to literarynonfiction@mail.com
To help me provide you with useful feedback, I encourage you to send along specific questions and concerns when you submit drafts.
Length: Approximately 1,200 words (roughly four or five double-spaced word-processed pages)

In this assignment, we will write an account of a visit to some particular place. Though the place may be either distant or close to home, the purpose of the visit and the focus of the essay should not be primarily personal (no trips to the old homestead or fondly remembered family outings). Rather, through close observation and factual investigation, you should attempt to convey the social, historical, cultural, and/or natural significance of the place itself. Attend to the guidelines, suggestions, and requirements that follow.


For readings that accompany the assigned revisions of this project, see READINGS. Also, be sure to keep up with the previews and postscripts at NOTES and the weekly writing assignments at WRITING PROJECTS. Below are the readings due by our class meeting on September 29.

Required Readings in Zinsser's On Writing Well:
Review all of Part I ("Principles") and Part II ("Methods") (pages 3-91)
Read carefully Chapter 13: "Writing About Places: The Travel Article" (pages 116-131)

Required Online Readings

Remember to print out online readings and bring the hard copies to class.
-"Follow the Path to England's Middle Earth" (Times Online)
-"A Hashish House in New York," by H.H. Kane (Harper's, 1883)

Required Essays (handouts)
-"Los Angeles Notebook," by Joan Didion
-"Where Worlds Collide," by Pico Iyer



Composing Strategies

Be guided by the suggestions contained in Chapter 13 of On Writing Well, "Writing about Places: The Travel Article." Let me highlight a few of Zinsser's precepts and observations:

  • The mere agglomeration of detail is no free pass to the reader=s interest. The detail must be significant.

  • If a phrase comes to you easily, look at it with deep suspicion; it=s probably one of the countless clichés that have woven their way so tightly into the fabric of travel writing.

  • Eliminate every . . . fact that is a known attribute: don=t tell us that the sea had waves and the sand was white. Find details . . . [that] do useful work.

  • Your main task as a travel writer is to find the central idea of the place you=re dealing with.

  • [W]hatever place you write about, go there often enough to isolate the qualities that make it distinctive. Usually this will be some combination of the place and the people who inhabit it.

  • By interviewing local men and women . . . I tapped into one of the richest veins waiting for any writer who goes looking for America: the routine eloquence of people who work at a place that fills a need for someone else.

Some additional things to keep in mind:

1. Prepare for this assignment by reading the assigned professional essays on places and travel. Begin with the numerous brief examples in Chapter 13 of On Writing Well, and then study the various works posted above. Read (and reread) actively: identify passages that strike your interest, and then consider the strategies that were employed to achieve particular effects. 

2. Don't feel at all obliged to visit a traditional tourist spot. The place you choose may be remarkably ordinary (or seemingly so)--a flea market, an abandoned church, a gas station. It may even be downright awful. Just make sure that the place is real and accessible--no trips to heaven or back to the womb. Take notes while you're there so that your impressions are sharp and fresh. 

3. This assignment calls for some basic research: take notes on what you see and hear; obtain facts wherever you can find them.  The essay should be built primarily on factual observations and descriptive details. If you turn to outside sources for information, make note of those sources. When we review drafts, we=ll discuss the best way to integrate citations into our final texts. But do keep track of your sources.

4. As you make your literary return visit to the place (and even, perhaps, as you compose your draft), don't be too quick to impose some grand meaning on your subject.  Let your detailed observations and investigations lead you (and the reader) to a conclusion: induction rather than deduction.

5. Feel free to use the first-person pronoun in your essay, but don't focus excessively on yourself or your feelings.  Don't take this personally, but the reader cares about the place--not about you.

Manuscript format:

Word processed (Microsoft Word or WordPerfect), standard 12-point font, with one-inch margins: top, bottom, left, and right.  Following your essay, provide a brief self-evaluation by responding to these questions:

1. What part of this essay do you like most, and why?
2. What part gave you the most difficulty? Explain.
3. What is your overall evaluation of the essay--its particular strengths and possible weaknesses?
Please be as specific as you can in your answers.

 

Your Name

e-mail address

Date

 

 

 

 

 

 

Title of Essay

 

Begin essay here...

Name of Assignment

Status (e.g., Draft #1)

approx. length:  (in words)

 


English 5760 is taught by Dr. Richard Nordquist.
Armstrong Atlantic State University
Solms Hall 211C
11935 Abercorn Street
Savannah, Georgia 31419
912/344 2613

e-mail: 
literarynonfiction@mail.com
   

                                       


11 November 2008