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Faulkner, William. As I Lay Dying.
Shes Better Off Dead, and So Is
the Fish
In an O Brother, Where Art Thou? misadventure
fashion, Faulkner shows us the bumbling Bundren clan, sadly perhaps at
its best, persevering despite logic, weather, and the rotting, stinking corpse of Momma
Addie. As they travel to Addies dying wish, they serve as
the stereotypical backwoods people who are too stupid to even recognize the absurdity of the
journey. Thus, the novel certainly criticizes the morals of the South, but it does so by
offering tragically realistic characterizations in conjunction with a unique narrative
approach. Faulkner gives the premier performance that every other author attempts to
recreate but always falls short. He offers the Southern grotesque version of stream of
consciousness from EVERYONES perspective! The reader at first feels guilty for
laughing at the horrible images portrayed, holes being drilled into Addie dead face,
however, one quickly realizes that humor is essential to fully appreciating the social and
educational isolation of these poor fools, literally. How does the novel criticize the
South? As I Lay Dying fulfills every
stereotype by epitomizing all aspects of country life and people, primarily via a negative stance.
Beginning with setting and moving to plain ethics, Faulkner details daily
life-agriculture, buildings, livestock, religion, cooking, and neighbors, mostly with good intentions
(from the neighbors that is). More importantly, the significance of such items to the
Bundrens is conveyed through each characters narration. The reasons such aspects are
considered negative are numerous.
First, each child works tediously at different assigned
manual labor chores because their father is lazy and manipulative
and their mother is dying. Even as Addie withers away, Anse cannot lift a finger
(successfully) to ease anyones burden-nice play with the last name. The children do not enjoy
chores, except Cash who is a good carpenter (4), but they endure them because chores are
absolutely necessary to maintain life on the farm. They do not have money to pay
others and must work themselves. Ironically, nothing and no one can help Addie. It is
as if living among these idiots has drained the life right out of her.
The entire concept of manual labor implies that no thought
is involved, required. Faulkner confirms this through the
wandering inner thoughts of each. Instead of focusing on the chores at hand, they are free to
daydream. They can mechanically complete chores with little or no mental effort. Again,
the only exception is probably Cash who painstakingly plans every pass over the
wood as he builds his mothers coffin. Darl also is sidetracked with huge questions that
constantly distract and dismay him. Whether dreaming about a fish, how to get rid of
a baby, or imagining how you will look in your new teeth, your true intelligence and
talents will shine through.
In addition, the novel accurately portrays the hypocrisy
of religion, especially in the South. The characters curse God for
their misery and pray to him to make it all better. Addie has an affair with the preacher
Whitfield who actually performs her funeral service later. Dewey Dell is the pregnant
daughter trying desperately to rid herself of this unwanted pregnancy, while also trying to
make sense out of her own future. Cora is perhaps the only one who does not
use the Lords name in vain, but it is more out of drilled habit than sincere belief.
Regular church visits, Bible recitations and singing hymns cannot save such hypocritical
people.
This controversy is expressed nicely at the end of one of
Dewey Dells chapters. She ends trying to convince herself that if
there were a God she would believe in him because he would help her with all of her
problems. She is also coming to terms with her mothers death and what it means for her to stay
behind and care for her distorted family. She questions, pleads and states, I
believe in God, God. God, I believe in God (122). She speaks directly to God uncertain if he
is listening. Selfish reliance of God and on others creates a powerful link to the fifty
something chapters of inner thoughts and turmoils. The road to New Hope(120),
completing tasks Fore God (230), and even the blaspheming unite this family in their
one quest-bury Addie. Why are the characters
realistic/believable?
The characters are believable because they are flawed.
They each have idiosyncrasies and none of them is very smart. Several
of the characters appear in name in other Faulkner works, and others closely
resemble personalities and quirks. Faulkner has actually created his own cast of stock
characters to refer to when writing. In particular, he draws from The Sound and the Fury.
For instance, Dewey Dell is Cassy with less class and hopes of a happy future. Surrounded
by men, overwhelmed with a growing sense of sexuality, even tempted by ideas of
incest, each is doomed. The female daughter suffers mainly because of a detached mother,
also present in both novels.
While Benjy was the family dummy, Vardaman is the roaming
idiot in the Bundren family. He desperately tries to make
sense out of the chaos around him, but his simple mind can only focus on one tragedy at a
time; thus, My mother is a fish (84) is a remarkable assessment of his life. He is
subjected to mental and physical abuse but never to the extent that Benjy had to suffer.
What is important about this stock character is the message he sends to outsiders: I am a
product of my environment-poverty, illiteracy, ignorance; and I am the consequence of
my heredity- stupidity, laziness, and hopelessness.
While Quentin searches for a purpose in life planning his
own suicide, Darl must answer his probing questions too: What
is the meaning of life? Why am I here? Why am I surrounded by people I can only barely
tolerate? If there is a God, why has he condemned me to this existence?
Such normal and insightful questions are impressive as are Darls concerns for others. He
actually ponders, reflects, contemplates. But such a character cannot exist for long in this
world without becoming part of the ugly violence. Darl is the key to answering not only
his own questions but the readers questions as well. His insights and observations
provide vital information, linking what otherwise would be senseless ramblings into a
chronological order of pain and loss.
Anse is the physically present but basically worthless
father. He always puts himself forward, avoiding all exertion. He
defies the stereotype of the strong laborer providing for his family. He takes no pride in
work because he never works. He accepts his children because they are there and can do things
for him. He accepts the charity of neighbors and no longer asks for help but expects it
from all directions. He accepts his life because he is too lazy to change it. Again, what at
first seems pathetic is actually humorous. Faulkner creates a new reality by playing up some
aspects of southern life while distorting specific aspects recognized by all. How is Faulkners narrative
technique different from others? Why does it work?
First, Faulkners technique is virtually unique. Yes,
he does utilize stream of consciousness, but he does so with every
character. The chapters, if you want to call them that, are unorganized, illogical, and
weak if the reader expects them to flow like a normal novel. Faulkner
forces the reader to do the real work. It is as if Faulkner has removed himself completely as the
author. He has created characters whom he allows to tell their own stories. The reader must
piece the varying perspectives together in order to fully grasp the situation. The
repetition, the altering of observations, the changing of dialogue, and especially the insight
into each characters beliefs and feelings enhance the awkwardness of the Bundrens but
also their strange sense of sincerity, family obligation, and right to go on.
The journey to bury Addie is another uniting factor of the
novel. The novel does have that basic purpose in addition to
others. Yet, continuity also exists in the narration. By slightly changing the narration to make
each chapter truly representative of the identified character, Faulkner makes each section
plausible, honest, true to character. However, he does not do so drastically. For
instance, he maintains the same stream of consciousness perspective no matter who is sharing. He
alters the visions, perceptions, ideas but not the framework, the concept, the uniting
force. With the objectivity of outsiders scattered throughout, he also creates a sense of
credibility and reliability. The reader believes because even the normal
people describe the tragic Bundren family road trip.
Sadly, the characters are realistic because we have seen
them around us. We have come into contact with at least one of
the Bundrens, and if you shop at Wal-Mart, you have seen the whole gang. Are we to pity
them? Do we shy away from them? Do we attempt to help them? It depends on how
brave you are and how dirty they are that day. The real questions that Faulkner poses
are: How do you avoid being one of them? If you already are, how do you escape? No,
seriously, Faulkner wants each reader to examine his/her own life. Are you a product of
your environment/heredity? Do you defy stereotypes? Do you aspire to be
something more? What are you willing to do? Why? Teaching Ideas: Students must be able to piece this
novel together to catch the good stuff. Allow them to create and maintain a time line,
marking the major events of the death and journey. Then, have them identify the key points
each character makes about the events, looking closely at both differences and
similarities. Then, allow them to appreciate the humor in the novel. It is perfectly acceptable to
laugh at the gruesome stench that is still lovingly called Addie. Why can violence be called a uniting
force of the novel? If Addies childhood was just as
miserable as her last years, why does she want to be buried in Is Dewey Dell naïve, stupid, or a
flirt? Why? How? Why does Faulkner include Vardaman? What
does he add to the novel? Is he an essential character? Why would a southerner like Faulkner
make fun of the South? As a southerner, are you offended? Why or why not? Imagine yourself as a news reporter in smells, etc. as the Bundrens roll into
town. Using lyrics from country music, string
them together to create The Ballad of the Bundrens. Write your own ode or sonnet in memory of Addie and her suffering. |
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English 7758 is taught by Dr. Richard Nordquist.
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11 July 2002