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English 7758 Dr. Nordquist July 27, 2002 Diving into Uncharted Waters Chopin, Kate. The Awakening. New
York: Avon, 1972.
It saddens me greatly to imagine Chopins dismay at
the horrible reception of The Awakening. Obviously, readers and
critics alike completely missed the needed epi gained by Edna in the novel. Societal
restrictions prevented them from truly experiencing the novel just as Edna at first is
embarrassed to even be seen holding one of the outrageous books being
passed around on Grand Isle. The novel should serve as enlightening glimpse into a womans
soul. Edna expresses, through actions and wo what others fear. She is the
outrageous soul that Mademoiselle Reisz prompts. S changes her role by breaking free of the
restrictions, which before had always mad feel out of place.
As far as teaching The Awakening in high school,
the novel has a variety of app The novel is a fast read with balanced
but provoking sentences. The short chapters themselves to quick reading in stages.
The content is adult but universal and discre presented. The French terminology is not
unapproachable as a number of footnotes translations. (I enjoyed utilizing my
own French to decipher names as well.) Stude should be reminded of the time period
and the restrictions placed on women. Comp and contrasting the two time periods
would be beneficial in realizing that Chopin h write what she did, and society had to
trash her efforts. Students should realize that although advancements have been made,
women and men are still not considered e most areas. Examining the differences
between the North and South still today wo prove so.
This novel could be taught in conjunction with Their
Eyes Were Watching God, having students detail the similarities
between Janies awakening and Ednas. To compare male and female roles, the novel
could also be taught in conjunction with Frome, determining which
character is more trapped by societal roles and obligatio What roles does Edna play? How do
such roles change? Why? How? Mother-woman (Madonna-Angel):
This role is problematic for Edna. Others want her to
epitomize the role, but ver in the novel the narrator blatantly
tells the reader Edna is not one of the women w idealized their children, worshipped
their husbands, and esteemed it a holy privileg efface themselves as individuals and
grow wings as ministering angels (16). Edna feel compelled to try to wear such a
mask in public
for a while. Afteral, she has b married for six years now and has two
children. Yet, as she discovers herself, she becomes disgusted by such conformity.
She rebels and runs in the opposite directio upon returning to New Orleans. However,
she surprises herself by slipping back in role of mother and wife. Even at her
coming out dinner, she realizes that giving s elaborate party with well-chosen guests
is exactly what was expected of her. This realization depresses her. Consider her
response:
But as she sat there amid her guests, she felt the
old ennui overtaking her, the hopelessness which so often assailed
her, which came upon her like an obsession, l something extraneous, independent of
volition (148).
In public, she is reserved, refined, polite, enchanting,
playing one of many roles is the dutiful wife until she reaches
her breaking point. She appreciates the materia gifts her husband showers her with,
usually out of guilt; but she flinches at the thou him touching her. She avoids him and his
attention at all cost, staying out all night hammock despite chill, mosquitoes, and
the possibility of rumors. A typical reactio Edna is:
She heard him moving about the room; every sound
indicating impatience and irritation. Another time she would have
gone in at his request. She would, through have yielded to his desire; not with any
sense of submission or obedience to his compelling wishes, but unthinkingly, as
we walk, move, sit, stand, go through the d treadmill of the life which has been
portioned out to us (52). [She loathes having t submit, but she is used to the routine.]
She is a mother only because she has given birth, and even
that she was numbed purposely. She feels just occasional
sporadic emotions concerning her children. Sh neither loves nor dislikes them, showing
indifference if she even gets near them. S welcomes whatever excuse will take them
away.
Thus, she only fulfills the mother-woman role on a
superficial level. This balkin the role is really a quest to change the
definition of woman. Often, when Edna is tr behaving as she wants, she refers to
herself as unwomanly. The connotations must for her to still fit the mold.
In reality, she is casting a new mold, while being hau by the Madonna Madame
Ratignoles plea to think of the children (182). *Mr. Pontellier is no more of a husband
though. He is just as cold and distant to his wife
and children, showering them with gifts instead of himself. Bird:
Although she does not have angelic wings, Edna is
described as a bird througho novel. She is attempting to fly, to soar
on her own, but others want her to stay grou Edna recounts Mademoiselle Reisz: The
bird that would soar above the level plai tradition and prejudice must have strong
wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weak bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to
earth (138).
When she realizes that she will never truly be free, she
chooses death. The nove comes full circle as she returns to the
beach. She sees a bird with a broken wing herself. The futility of her quest is
obvious. She too is an injured bird, beating the above, reeling, fluttering, circling
disabled down, down, to the water (189). The endings show desperation and unavoidable
suicide. The bird reference shows that f sometimes is short-lived. She returns to
natures calming power. *She even rents herself a little pigeon
house where she feels more at home, secur free. Artist:
Edna also aspires to be an artist. What was once a passing
hobby on bored days emerges as a passion, a driving force in
her life. She does not necessarily improve artistic skill, but she does gain more
satisfaction from the sense of control she feels painting. Edna also has others admiring
her work. Only Mademoiselle Reisz challe her talent and motivation. Reisz brings
Edna to tears with music and then questions Edna plans to do with her art. Child:
Edna is sadly seen as a child. She felt like some
new-born creature, opening its in a familiar world that it had never
known (189). She experiences life from a chil perspective because she has not really
lived previously. But the condescending resp from others is troubling. Edna is very
childlike. I was a little unthinking child in t days, just following a misleading
impulse without question (30). She has been stri to live that way again. At first she
appears childlike because she is submissive. She submissive wife, social beauty, a
product of her time and society. People speak to using pet names; her husband gives her
treats to make her happy; she enjoys feelin naughty and adventurous. The men who
hope to seduce her, excluding her husband treat her like a woman. Later, she is
referred to as a child when she asserts herself. considered temperamental, immature,
unfair, spoiled, selfish. She often dwells on comforting childhood memories to ease
her mind and soul, and these memories are final thoughts as she drowns. Possession:
Edna is first a possession. She is an object. At the
beginning of the novel, her hu is annoyed by her sunburn, looking
at his wife as one looks at a valuable piece of personal property which ahs suffered
some damage (7). When she finally learns
t swim, others want to take credit for her
accomplishment. She is unwillingly attache those around her except Robert. When Mr.
Pontellier leaves the Grand Isle, she fee is she were being borne away from some
anchorage which held her fast (58). She equally bound to the children. It is not
her choice, and this is why she tells Madam Ratignolle she would never
sacrifice herself for her children (79).
The house in New Orleans is also a reflection of
possession and power. Mr. Pontellier was very found of walking
about his house examining its various appoin and details, to see that nothing was
amiss. He greatly valued his possessions, chiefl because they were his, and derived
genuine pleasure from contemplating a painting statuette, a rare lace curtain
(83).
Edna recognizes this role as a possession, and she works
hard to change. Cond would some way adjust themselves, she
felt; but whatever came, she had resolved again to belong to another than herself
(133). She will not even sacrifice herself fo Robert. She declares, I am no
longer one of Mr. Pontelliers possessions to dispo or not. I give myself where I choose
(178).
Being a possession leaves Edna frantic to break free from
her prison--all of her r She must first discover the key to her
freedom. What are the prevailing themes in
addition to self-discovery and awakening? Ah!Si tu connais!:
This song title/lyric pops up when needed most to spur
Edna on. It summarizes how she feels and what she wants. If
you knew, if you really knew, if you only knew she could be free to live and love her
way. She first hears the phrase from Robert, plays the theme over and over again
during her self-discovery. She realizes that her can be fulfilling, rewarding and
passionate. She desires to be s sexual entity, indulg not just with Robert (more emotionally
than physically) but with Alcée more than well (more physically than emotionally);
she even becomes a spiritual being as she contemplates death by suicide. Her
sexual battle cry is a wonderful secret, but she i of saying it to herself. Two people hear
her plea, but neither of these men can com understand what it means for Edna.
Robert simply wishes to change her from one wife to his own, keeping her to himself
as a newly acquired possession. Alcée will eventually tire of her and seek a new
challenge. Pain:
Emotional pain is clearly evident for/in Edna. But the
pain that drives her final decision is connected to the physical
pain of childbirth. The word labor appears frequently in the novel, as do pregnant
and death. A pregnant woman was not t seen in public. The horrific brutality
of the event for Edna was numbed with chloro She regains the awareness of the
traumatic experience when she endures Madame Ratignolles ordeal. Just as Robert
has helped awaken her sexual self, the reality of and motherhood is no longer a deadened
sensation (181-2). She could no longer accomplice to hiding unpleasantness,
life. Death:
Edna faces death on many levels. She regrets having
allowed her individuality t remain dead for so long. Her emotions,
her desires, her talents, and even her thoug have been in a deep slumber. Yet, she
awakens to find an unaccommodating world is destined to play a role until her
death much like her mother. According to Mr. Pontellier, the Colonel was
perhaps unaware that he had coerced his own wife int grave (119). The Colonel believes
that Mr. Pontellier needs to take a firmer hand t Edna, be stricter. Mr. Pontellier
preferred to leave her alone, which is part of the pr She always felt alone until she met
Robert. If she acts on her feelings, she will be e more of an outcast (already not a Creole
nor Catholic). She will be dead to society. continues to play the role, her spirit
will die. She has already admitted that she wou anything for her children except give up
herself. Thus, her only recourse is to allow spirit to live, to soar by releasing it
from her body. Why is the novel more popular than
ever?
Chopins novel is timeless and meaningful not
just to women but to everyone w felt misplaced, ignored, isolated. The
universality is paralleled only to the Chopins narration and alluring style. Language/Style:
Virtually every page of the novel has a reference to
awakening. If the exact w not used, a synonym, an allusion, or
form of the root is prevalent. Examples includ relief, freedom, dream, half-awakened,
natural, newly awakened, waking, awakeni melted, etc.
Chopin writes with a general smoothness and clarity, but
interestingly, she also with subtleties and sexual innuendoes.
The novel has specific flavor due to the mys Creole references and the passionate
usage of French phrases and names. Together elements enhance the regional, secluded
and sensual qualities of the novel. Most o though, Chopins language is an
active part of Ednas seduction. In particular, alliteration, assonance and consonance
echo and emphasize the power of language seduction. First, the setting is conducive to Ednas awakening experience. The narrator seduces the reader into loving
Ednas drive for independence. Notice how most of the following examples exaggerate the
s sound, even using soft c as well.
I addition, notice the similar themes,
allusions, and symbols (these are the driving fo behind Chopins attainable novel): The sun was low in the west, and
the breeze soft and languorous that came up fro south, charged with the seductive odor
of the sea (23). Nature first seduces Edna. The voice of the sea is seductive;
never ceasing, whispering, clamoring, murmuri inviting the soul to wander for a spell
in abysses of solitude; to lose itself in mazes inward contemplation (25). Note
how the ing endings create a rushing and reck sense of urgency. Edna must give in or
lose herself completely. What is even more profound about this statement is that
Chopin chooses to use it again at the end of th novel on p. 189, bringing the novel full
circle. The voice of the sea speaks to the
soul. The touch of the sea is sensuous, enfoldin body in its soft, close embrace
(25). Edna is connected to the sea from the beginni until the end. She discovers her
yearning for freedom and independence in the wate returns to the water where she can
experience it again, eternally. But among the conflicting
sensations which assailed her, there was neither shame remorse (140). She no longer
regrets her actions but experiences them willingly a passionately. There was with her a feeling of
having descended in the social scale, with a corresponding sense of having risen in the spiritual (156). She transcends her fate.
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