English 1102 FICTION ESSAY                                                                    Revision Checklist/Grade Sheet

Format and Conventions

_____ Essay was turned in on time and submitted (with drafts) in a pocket folder.

_____ Essay is word-processed, includes self-evaluation, and follows conventions outlined in handout                                      (double-spaced, name and date on page one, and so on).

Content, Organization, Development, and Style

_____ Introductory paragraph identifies the author and title of each work, suggests the basic approaches to be taken in the                   analysis, and offers some indication of the purpose of this analysis.

_____ Essay is written consistently in the present tense and avoids needless use of "I."

_____ Each body paragraph begins with a focused topic sentence that identifies a main point related to the thesis.

_____ Body paragraphs consistently avoid needlessly summarizing the story or stories.

_____ Main points are consistently supported with specific evidence.

_____ Quotations are brief and clearly appropriate.

_____ Each quotation is accompanied by relevant commentary ("so what?").

_____ Essay responds directly to the assigned topic, avoiding repetition and attending to established guidelines.

_____ Observations throughout the essay are consistently insightful and clearly expressed--building on some of the ideas                   raised in class discussions but  not limited to those ideas.

_____ Smooth transitions are provided throughout the essay, giving it a clear sense of building toward a conclusion.

_____ Conclusion effectively draws together the main points of the essay without relying on needless repetition.

_____ Organization is clear, logical, and sound without being formulaic.

_____ Sentences have been effectively revised for clarity, variety, and conciseness.

_____ Word choice is generally precise and appropriate.

_____ Essay successfully avoids the vague use of "this." 

_____ Paper is free of major errors (run-ons, fragments, reference, verb faults).

_____ Paper is free of distracting errors (grammar, punctuation, spelling).